Blog: Expanded Universe

hitting publish is scary

Every time I reread something I've written, I'll find something I want to revise or tweak, something that makes me go, hmm, do I really believe this? Did I do enough research, present enough evidence, exhaust the space of alternative hypotheses? Am I just missing something dumb, am I repeating myself, is this something that's already obvious to everybody but me and I should just stop writing and touch grass? And it doesn't really matter whether I'm rereading it before or after I've clicked the Publish button. If I wanted to only publish stuff I have none of these doubts about, I would never publish anything; instead, the best I can do is decide on a point below which I stop caring about the diminishing returns.

But, one way in which it's scarier than it needs to be is that I have the writer's instinct to "write well", make it direct and confident and presentable, cut the verbiage and unnecessary hedging. "Omit needless words", in Strunk & White's immortal phrasing. Conclude with a conclusion, even. The instinct is trained on all the writing of all the other writers I've read over the years, who maybe really are more confident than me, whether or not that's justified, or who become more successful in some part conditioned on how confident they came across to readers. Part of me will emulate them on some mechanical level, even when I really am not confident; when I am endlessly confused about some ideas, decided to write about them to try to sort them out, and maybe made a little progress, but hardly concluded anything... conclusive.

Like, what doubts do I have about my previous post, one day later?

Who was it who wrote about the difficulty of endings on the internet? Robin Sloan, of course. Somehow, the piece looks different from what I remember...